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Gotta love the explosion of colours Ben. Don't replace the boxhead though! I like it.
-- Staff at *vbu | Bulbagarden | Oekaki | Gallery | I know you checked advanced critique but I'm going to comment anyway. It's a very moving piece, and you're one of the few I know who seems to publish art with a purpose. Many seem to think art should just be pretty when it can be so much more. Thoughtful piece and a great message.
-- If you're going through hell Keep on going, Don't slow down If you're scared, don't show it You might get out Before the devil even knows you're there Has an old school feel to it, the way the letter flow very freely, throwup style - they move, with energy - the colors help for sure too. I generally don't care for
graf/graff style art that is (for lack of more approproate term - sorry) cartoon based (sorry, really no offense meant!), but this is tops man. Leave the boxhead too. Only advanced crtique would be to give the graff letters a bit more structure, and replace the font with a handstyle - but it would require either some labor intensive letter drawing or a really cool, uniuque font - but really that's only pickin' nits because it says "advanced critique" - you know I dig you stuff, even if it's been a while. Props on the Aesop Rock quote too, very keen. As for the state fo the world, no doubt bro, what a mess. There's Terrible things going on in many coutries, and sadly they'll get no attention because their lands hold no natural resources or stragic locations, so they continue to suffer. And that's not to say that any intervention would necessarily be a solution, but it might at least put a strangle on some of the suffering, and save a few lives in spite of itself... Hoping for a better day bro, keep up the work -- Your life is defined by its opportunities... even the ones you miss. Can't remember if it was you or some other person I talked about this, but if I ever do manage to create the dream house and family I dream of, my kids are going to be allowed to do whatever they want with their walls (NOT THE CARPET, THOUGH) - be it drawing, random painting, whatever.
XD I'm gonna be the best art mum, EVER. |
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